Same Moon

This is the best piece i've done so far
OC story goes like kina like this:
Stonefire likes Lilybrook, who is clueless and doesn't know. Lilybrook likes Adderheart. Stonefire eventually wins over Lilybrook even thought he doesn't know it, and Adderheart becomes mates with Birdfeather. Birdfeather dies of sickness after the kits birth, so Adderheart Raises two evil sons, FoxFang and Snaketail. Stonefire finds Lilybrook in the forest, trying to control her growing power, when Stonefire shows her his own. Adderheart watches them from behind several bushes. He stalks out, retending he hadn't heard, and tells Stonefire to go take a hunting patrol. When Stonefire leaves, Adder heart, still bitter over Lilybrooks rejection, decides to use his power as deputy to force her out of the clan. He finds out that Rainstar, Hollydawn, and BarkClaw all have powers and uses him and his sons anger to turn the clan against the other cats. They get Exiled. Stonefire comes back, and Adderstar tells him. Stonefire lashes out at him, but Adderstar was prepared, and takes Stonefire down. Stonefire hopes to be exiled so he can be with Lilybrook, but Adderstar wants to punish him by keeping him here as a prisoner for the rest of his life. His sister tries to calm him down, and the following ensues:

Stonefire laughed coldly. "You think Adderstar will show any mercy to the rest of the clan? Look what he did to Lilybrook!" Stonefire turned away from his sister, looking up at the moon in anguish. "At least," he murmured, "We Still See The Same Moon..."

So yeah...